okay so from last week's thumbnail, I slightly tilted the bridge in order to create more depth and to avoid the flatness in the foreground. I also gave more shapes to the trees, the carriage and the house.
Monday, June 24, 2013
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Nice work, Jasmine. I think your scene could use deeper space. Parts of the drawing are lacking details which would enlarge the scale, reinforce perspective, and create atmosphere. The house is drawn tighter than the foreground, so it seems close. The foreground trees are a bit simple. More reference for the foreground, midground could help you. Tonals: at this stage, think only about light and shadow. There is too much range on bg objects.
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