Monday, July 1, 2013

Jesse Yang Week 3 HW

Hey everyone! Here is what I have done over this week! The first is the final line drawing and the second is the tonal study for it. I do not know if this will be the last version of either pieces, but here is what I've done.

I added more space and distance with the objects to make the composition better.

Any critiques are welcome!

Thanks and see you all in few hours!



  1. You succeeded in giving a sense of dark drama and better decor to reflect the characters in this scene. The perspective and scale seems off. Also I think you could strengthen the silhouette of the character shadow.

  2. Hi Patrick,

    I wanted to include a blood trail as well, so how could I incorporate that into the scene without contradicting the character's shadow?

    Thank you!